Monday, August 9, 2010

I made a fishing rod


Last week I made a fishing rod. I wrote a recount about how I made my fishing rod. I used some time words to help me put my recount in the right order. By Joe

5 comments:

Writer's Wall said...

What a fantastic recount Joe! You are really clever using all those time words and I think your fishing rod looks fantastic!

From Mrs Anderson :)

Ms Hansell said...

Thank you Joe. You have spoken very well about your fishing rod on the video. I hope you catch some fish.

Anonymous said...

Thank you for doing this for me. I like it when people look at my work.

From Joe

RKELLY said...

Now I know how you made your fishing line! You read your story very clearly, Joe. Keep working hard!

Anonymous said...

Thank you Mrs Kelly for doing that for me. I enjoyed fishing today at the Wharf. Thank you for helping and have nice day Mrs Kelly.